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Re: A Single Offense
Hadn't thought of that. Good point, Snoink. I once heard of a man who regularly purchased double or triple ply toilet paper, then pulled apart the layers so he had ...
Aug 16, 2006 -
Re: for Maggie
Hmm.. I reread the poem again. I just caught an idiom I missed. Can't believe I missed that. This is even better than I thought.
Aug 15, 2006 -
Re: Hey there
Hi Jesseble! Welcome to the YWS! It's an interesting place, as I'm sure you've already noticed... :D
Aug 15, 2006 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
I'm reading Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury (again), as well. We have an essay due on it Friday. Life of Pi by Yann Martel is interesting. Read it twice. You'll ...
Aug 15, 2006 -
Re: Where does everyone live?
I think we may have one of these going already, I'm not sure... I currently live in Michigan, though I'm also well-acquainted with Texas.
Aug 15, 2006 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Yes. Humor is good. Fried. Battered. Dipped in brown gravy. - Ophelia I try to laugh when I can. Not that the opportunity arises often. Some would say I carry ...
Aug 15, 2006 -
Re: The Cynic Speaks
Hi stilltyping, I enjoyed reading this. The rhythm, for the most part, has a very easy flow. Not everything rhymes perfectly, but the same rhythm remains, so that's okay. There ...
Aug 15, 2006 -
Re: Bleet
Yes, I think WL covered everything. Ribbons in her hair and shrapnel in her face... powerful. Well done, bent!
Aug 14, 2006 -
Re: A Single Offense
This is a short essay I wrote a while back for a persuasion assignment. The subject matter may be a bit different than that of other essays you have read... ...
Aug 14, 2006 -
Re: Interactive Stories
This looks great, Nate. Well done! Thank you for including such detailed instructions. I would never have thought to use Wiki, but it really makes perfect sense.
Aug 14, 2006 -
Re: The Homecoming
Hi antigone, First, if you can tell by my quick critique that I'm missing another level in this, please excuse me. It's happened before. :D I like this poem. I ...
Aug 14, 2006 -
Re: Italy, July 2006
Basically all I can say is what xanthan gum has already. It is a nice poem. I don't think I would change anything about it, although the first stanza is ...
Aug 14, 2006 -
Re: All About Harmony'sSake
Hi Harmony! Welcome to the YWS. I hope you enjoy your stay. Everyone here is very nice and helpful, just ask one of the guys in the light, bold blue ...
Aug 14, 2006 -
Re: Hello
Hi, Leeloo! I look forward to reading some of your work!
Aug 14, 2006 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
I'm reading "Treasure Island" by Robert Louis Stevenson. It's one of those books I always thought I had read, but never actually had.
Aug 14, 2006
